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Pieces  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
4/25/2021 8:12 am
Pieces

Pieces
written December 5th, 2020

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things broken
in pieces
not finding peace

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shattered glass
shards reflect
the sun

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minnows dart
through shallow streams
as bright sun pierces

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senfully 55F  
443 posts
4/25/2021 8:14 am

 I like these. More "not haiku".


kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
4/25/2021 8:19 am

 so descriptive. love it


senfully replies on 4/26/2021 6:00 am:
Thank you! Always happy to see you. Hugs!

Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
4/25/2021 11:42 am

 This reminds me of the state of broken that humans reside in, along with the perpetual motion of life, and how there is an energy source that is infused into it all.

There is a perspective that existence is an unfolding from a mind and a returning to that mind. This harkens to the idea of being broken and ever moving toward harmony and completion.

Cool write!
*. *. *


senfully replies on 4/26/2021 6:00 am:
Interesting! Gives me things to think about, and I love that. Yes my life has definitely moved in cycles. More functional and rewarding, less functional and rewarding, and sometimes just hibernating. Thank you for being here and sharing your thoughts. These responses are becoming an important part of the poetry for me.

fang070 53M
1309 posts
4/25/2021 3:30 pm

 Very nice not-haikus, particularly first and second.
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senfully replies on 4/26/2021 5:57 am:
Thank you! Sometimes I can go on and on. I like how focused haikus are. I read haiku's frequently, and keep saying someday I will try to write something more haiku-like. Thank you for reading me and responding!

69ereatwetpussy 61M
6774 posts
4/25/2021 5:39 pm

 Fradgle
Handle with care
May be broke but still around
Can be replaced if wanted
Or move on
Clean up so you don't get hurt


senfully replies on 4/26/2021 5:56 am:
Yes, yes, yes! So hard for me to move on sometimes. Thank you for your words! Hugs tight.

MrWrong4RghtNow 57M
2439 posts
4/26/2021 3:20 am

 Are these three seperate ideas or one piece? Either way, i applaud the creativity
My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment


senfully replies on 4/26/2021 5:56 am:
Separate pieces. At first I called it fragments. I write in a notebook, and some just sit there and I'm not sure they'll ever turn into anything more. A few times I have posted things just to get them out of my notebooks. Silly I know, but I don't want to give up on anything I've written, even if it just seems like fragments of poems. Thank you for being here! Hugs!

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