1521 posts 12/19/2008 5:11 am
Last Read: 12/25/2008 4:25 pm
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A gift...
Her smile is like a sunrise on a perfect summer day, the flow in her hair; always blowing the right way, that look in her eyes when she says it's time to play, and the rasp in her voice as she simply makes me obey,
She's a gift to me you see, the very best one of all, feeling as lucky as lucky can be, sure hope I don't fall...
Her skin so soft and her mind so sharp, being better together; nothing to tear us apart, to reach right in and really take a hold of her heart, neither one expecting forever coming right from the start...
She's a gift to me you see, it's just the way I feel, petrified like a tree, to allow one my heart to steal...
Laying there next to her; there's nothing I want more, I've thought about it many days, of this I am so sure, I'd fight and die for her to end this lonely war, a gift of love that took it's shot and knocked me onto the floor...
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"There are no shortcuts to life's greatest achievements; therefore we take these risks not to escape life but to prevent life from escaping us!"poet Come visit [blog __poet__]
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3583 posts 12/25/2008 4:25 pm |
Sorry for not responding to each and every one of you as I normally do. I did in fact read every response... Thanks everyone... I hope you all enjoyed your holidays, and be sure to know that they are NOT over yet...
Cheers everyone!
~poet~
Merry Christmas!
"There are no shortcuts to life's greatest achievements; therefore we take these risks not to escape life but to prevent life from escaping us!"poet Come visit [blog __poet__]
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11240 posts 12/22/2008 12:33 am |
beautiful ... as usual ....
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427 posts 12/20/2008 5:31 am |
Good to see you writing again my friend. Very well said.
rm___poet__ replies on 12/20/2008 7:43 am: It's nice to have a little time to write. Thanks for stopping in Candy, it is always a pleasure! Happy holidays! |
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2131 posts 12/20/2008 1:38 am |
Enjoy your poetry... thank you for the beauty of your verse, poet.
Peace~n~Love~n~Hugs~n~Kisses...Lys
rm___poet__ replies on 12/20/2008 7:42 am: Thank you very much... Happy holidays to you! |
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3774 posts 12/19/2008 4:38 pm |
...to allow one my heart to steal...
Love those words...someday I hope to allow someone to steal my heart again...
rm___poet__ replies on 12/20/2008 7:42 am: I think we ALL want someone to walk in and steal our hearts. Cheers Neo. Happy holidays... |
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2186 posts 12/19/2008 9:04 am |
Beautifully written! I do love reading you, your words touch so deep....
Missed you ~Poet~!
Sweetness...
rm___poet__ replies on 12/19/2008 2:18 pm: Thank you very much Sweetness. I am so glad that you have stuck around. I'll be on for a little bit, but when school starts up I will be taking another little "break" from here... I'll always be back tho... Cheers! |
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13016 posts 12/19/2008 5:29 am |
God I love that feeling!! now if only to find it again....
beautiful poem, mr. you!! so happy to read you
Respond to every call that excites Your Spirit ~Rumi ..
rm___poet__ replies on 12/19/2008 5:36 am: It is a great feeling zandigal, but I think we are all looking for it... Thanks for the compliment... good to get some writing out... Love seeing you... Thanks for always being here. Cheers! |
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